Wednesday, 1 April 2015

Evaluation Screening


Question Asked:
What did you like about the final trailer?

Answers Given:
- Good use of diegetic sound
- Pacing (x3)
- Good use of montage
- Knife sound effect
- Clear Narrative (x12)
- Good use of body horror (x11)
- Effective music (x10)
- Clever use of phallic symbol with knife
- Unique concept
- Inter-titles read well (x5)
- Effective jump scare (x6)
- Wheel shots added to narrative (x3)
- Slo-mo knife shot (x2)
- Setting
- Scene when girl wakes up and sees the killer
- Good Ending (x2)
- Edited well (x2)
- Acting was good
- Nice cinematography
- Wide range of shots

Question Asked:
What do you think still needs to be improved?

Answers Given:
- Some shots are too long
- Becomes boring (x2)
me>- Scream is one shot is cut to suddenly
- Jump scare at the end was too quick (x3)
- Louder sound for jump scare (x3)
- Scream shot used twice (x4)
- Order of scenes is sometimes confusing
- Starting with inter-title isn't the best start
- Unclear why killer left
- Maybe closer up shot when hair is being pulled off
- Killer doesn't look evil enough
- Inter-titles could of tied in with story better with the use of colour
- Unsure if like font on inter-titles
- Music needs some work sounds a bit like dracula
- Levels on audio may need some work in places (x2)
- Could be more dialogue
- Title at the end a little too fast

Here is a bar chart representing the individuals scores given to our trailer out of 10.